What I want to improve.

I want to be able to improve my accents/seriousness within a characater as I am uually the type of actor who likes to do comedy sketches or do something funny. I don't mind playing a serious character as I can see my character building up an atmosphere however making people laugh is pretty entertaining for me as I can improvise well and come up with random situations.

What I think needs improving...

After watching the footage of the beginning of the play I feel that we (the people doing the plane crash effect) can try and Improve it so that we all stay in the "stage area" and then maybe try and experiment with the sound of the plane crash if we can't find the sound that sounds better than keep the one that we currently have.

The character of 'Jack'

As the class of 10H4 are aware I play the main villain Jack. The very sarcastic,scary and vile school boy who turns the majority of the children on the island into wild savages who kill one an other. Over the course of the past week or show I have not shouted as much as I was at the start of the play as it could of ruined my vocal cords and it makes my character seem more evil. I think that one problem with my facial expressions is that you can't really see them as I have long hair for the time being, in the next week or so i intend on getting it cut so that the audience can see that I am a sweet innocent boy at the start but then then in to a wild 'animal' as the play continues.